nobody’s gonna tell you why your music’s not that strong
and that’s because they literally don’t even know how to
most songwriters just can’t label any of the things that they’re doing
they’re just going off of feel in the vibe
but that’s simply a lack of knowledge
which you can absolutely improve if you use words that are tight
like mine but if you’re showing your music to somebody
and they’re not reacting at all to it
they are the wrong person to show it to